高中英语写好建议信课件.ppt

1、 Module 6 Unit 1A letter of suggestionSample writing 1Dear Committee Members,I wish to make a suggestion about a kind of artto put into our new art gallery.Our district is well-known for paper-cutting and the people are very skilled at it.At the moment these people donot have anywhere to display the

2、 variety and skill of their craftsmanship.If the skill is lost,there may be no record ofit.The gallery would provide them with an opportunity to preserve this skill.If you were to allow them to display their expertise here,I believe we could make our district famous and encourage more tourists to co

3、me here.I hope you will consider my suggestion favorably.Yours faithfully *Our district is well-known for paper-cutting and the people are very skilled at it.-1.skill of workersAt the moment these people do not have anywhere to display the variety and skill of their craftsmanship.-2.no other gallery

4、 If the skill is lost,there may be no record of it.-3.there may be no record1、2、3 点强调建艺术馆的必要性 The gallery would provide them with an opportunity to preserve this skill.-4.preserve the skillIf you were to allow them to display their expertise here,I believe we could make our district famous and encou

5、rage more tourists to come here.-5.famous&more tourists4、5 点强调建艺术馆的益处Sample writing 2Dear Committee Members,I wish to make a suggestion about the kind of artwork that should go into our new gallery.As I have carefully researched the subject and have had many discussions with residents in our distric

6、t,I believe my suggestion will be popular with most people.I have discovered that we have many fine artists in our district.We have many painters,both modern and traditional,some sculptors and a few excellent potters.We also have a group of people who meet regularly to practise traditional folk art.

7、At present,none of these groups have a place to display their work.The gallery would provide such a place and would help people in the district to learn more about our artists.I believe a gallery of local art craft would encourage the artists and would also make others proud of our local talent.I do

8、 hope you will consider my suggestion.Yours faithfully,一、篇章结构及内容一、篇章结构及内容（一）首段（一）首段：表明写作意图。简洁、精炼。：表明写作意图。简洁、精炼。（二）主体段落：（二）主体段落：1.要点全面要点全面：包括给出的（和要求扩展的）建议内容：包括给出的（和要求扩展的）建议内容和理由。和理由。2.条理清晰条理清晰：要点清晰，顺序合理，之间要有连接词：要点清晰，顺序合理，之间要有连接词或过渡语；理由充分，与建议内容之间有必然的因果关或过渡语；理由充分，与建议内容之间有必然的因果关系。系。3.合情合理合情合理：建议内容要入情入理，

9、有合理性和说服：建议内容要入情入理，有合理性和说服力。力。4.礼貌得体礼貌得体：语言要委婉礼貌，使人易于接受，不能：语言要委婉礼貌，使人易于接受，不能写成批评、命令或投诉信。写成批评、命令或投诉信。（三）尾段：（三）尾段：希望对方接受建议，并能对其有所帮助。希望对方接受建议，并能对其有所帮助。二、时态：二、时态：多用一般现在时和一般将来时。多用一般现在时和一般将来时。常用套语常用套语A 建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式 1.I am writing to you for the purpose of 2.You have asked me for my advice with regard

10、 toand Ill try to make some conductive suggestions.3.I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter.4.I wish to make a suggestion aboutB.表达建议（表达建议（body）1.first,first of all,firstly，secondlythen,after that,in the end,finally;Meanwhile,whats more/besides/moreoverConsequently/therefore,as a conseq

11、uence/as a result.2.I think it would be more beneficial if you could 3.I would like to suggest/recommend that you(should)4.If I were you,I would5.In my opinion,it would be wise to 6.When it comes to such a situation,I would like to suggest that you(should)7.It would be a good idea if you couldC.建议信结

12、尾常用句式建议信结尾常用句式 1.Thank you for your consideration.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/practical/useful /helpful/beneficial.2.I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.4.I feel that it would be beneficial i

13、f you stick to it.假如你叫孙军，是恩施高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：参考词汇参考词汇:穿行 穿行 thread ones way 天桥 天桥 overpass 问题问题建议建议学校和一所小学毗邻，对着学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小之孩子小,家长接送。交通家长接送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。穿行危险。政府应采取措施政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。如修天桥等。第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何

14、审题：思考的问题样题分析第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？要写的文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？(order)动作是什么时候发生的？(时态)(when)第一人称第一人称建议信建议信建议原因建议原因建议内容建议内容说理逻辑性说理逻辑性一般现在时一般现在时适当运用适当运用模板模板Dear Bob,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题).Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to .Then,it also help

15、s to .Besides,it should be a good idea to .You can also .(此四句不同的句式提出建议)As to ,I suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面).In addition,(其他建议).Im sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).Im looking forward to (表达愿望).Sincerely yours,Li Hua第二步：搜索相关词组或句型第二步：搜索相关词组或句型问题建议1.学校和一所小学毗邻，对 着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；2.加之孩子小,家长接送，交通更拥挤；3.学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。政府应 采

16、取措施,如修天桥 等。学校与一所小学毗邻学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街对着大街stand next to primary face/be faced with the main streetOur school stands next to a primary school,faced with the main street.推荐句型：推荐句型：非谓语结构非谓语结构Standing/Located next to a primary school,our school is faced with/faces the main street.Next to a primary school st

17、ands our school,faced with/facing a main street.倒装倒装 Its crammed with cars during the rush hours.高峰期交通繁忙高峰期交通繁忙.traffic.during the rush hoursDuring the rush hours,there are so many cars and buses going on the road thatDuring the rush hours,there is a lot of traffic.so.thatwith 结构结构With so many cars

18、and buses going on the road,加之孩子小加之孩子小,家长接送家长接送,交通更拥挤交通更拥挤 sendto,fetch.,非谓语结构非谓语结构.Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home,which makes the traffic heavier.Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home,making the situation more serious.,which.加之孩子小

19、，家长接送，交通更拥挤加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤Whats more,pick up.make.To make things worse/whats worse,many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded.In addition/Additionally/Whats more,parents often attend their kids to school,resulting in more serious traffic jams.What makes things worse

20、is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age.学生过街在车辆中穿行危险学生过街在车辆中穿行危险thread ones way，when doingIt is dangerous for the students to thread their way among buses and cars when crossing the road.固定句型固定句型 It is+adj.for to do.1.Students are risking their lives to thread

21、 their way among cars.润色润色小建议小建议2.Some are exposed to danger when crossing the ocean/sea of cars.灵活运用其它的短语进行意译：灵活运用其它的短语进行意译：适当增加形容词和副词：适当增加形容词和副词：it is extremely dangerous，it is of great danger政府应采取措施政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。如修天桥等。suggest/suggestion,take steps/measures/action to do such asMy suggestion is tha

22、t the government should表语从句表语从句固定句型 固定句型 It is high time that(虚拟语气虚拟语气)It is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like buildingI suggest that the government should take measures such as building an overpass.简单句简单句1.In order to release the stress of traffic problems,润色润色小建议小建议2.Aime

23、d at solving these problems,the government shouldA.适当添加一些意思（过渡句）适当添加一些意思（过渡句）3.Seeing these matters,never will I stop urging our government to take some measures.For the sake of improving the quality of traffic,it is significant to buildB.添加形容词和副词添加形容词和副词I strongly suggest,active/effective measures第

24、三步第三步.连句成连句成文文但要注意：篇章的连贯性但要注意：篇章的连贯性Next to a primary school stands our school,facing a main street._,its crammed with cars during the rush hour._ children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age._,its of great danger for the students to go through the traffic._,it is high tim

25、e that relevant authorities took some measures like building an overpass.A.As a consequence B.According to the phenomenon stated above C.When it comes to traffic jamsD.What makes things worse is that A.C.D.B.反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例不推荐字体不推荐字体优秀作文范例优秀作文范例优点：运用优点：运用 there be 句型，介词短语，从句，非句型，介词短语，从句，非谓语

26、，套用句式等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显谓语，套用句式等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。内涵和语言功底。优秀作文范例优秀作文范例优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底蕴。蕴。假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 PeterPeter 来信向你咨来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：参加中文学习班；要点：参加中文学习班；看中文书刊、电视；看中文书刊、电视；学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲

27、；交中国朋友。交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。给出。Dear Peter,Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ _Best wishes,Best wishes,Li HuaLi HuaDear Peter,I

28、m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers,and ma

29、gazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.In addition,You can also make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes,Li Hua